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[MvC3: Dante]

Dante's Mouth

Something really irks me about Dante's mouth. You used that same kind of mouth in your Wilhelm Park flash on the Boy character. It seems to overlap unnaturally on the outsides of the lips and he kind of looks like a fish.

The rest of the parts in your drawings are really nice, and you've improved in your animation skills here since Wilhelm Park.

I can't help but chuckle every time Morrigan says "Carlos DeSUZAAH."
Very nice voice acting on Caxx's part as well.

redminus responds:

no way dude you love that mouth
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technically, this Flash actually utilizes inferior animation techniques :(

[The Last Hour: Chapter 9]

Absolutely ridiculous...

You start out in chapter one with nothing but a few crappy drawings and an extremely lousy and contradictory story and then you CONTINUE IT!?!?

Science/space + religion doesn't work seeing as how they're COMPLETELY different sets of beliefs. Not to mention how you blatantly copied Star Wars for most of this.

I will say this though: you DID get a TINY bit better at "drawing" and, drawing only, with each flash but, they're all still sub-par at best.

What's also pretty ridiculous is the fact that you do like any Americanized movie does: include religion as a big part of the story and/or use the USA as the ONLY important country when your story revolves around a battle between EARTH and planet "X". What's also funny is the fact that the "Vatican", which you mention multiple times throughout your series, is in ITALY but, you make no effort to include that, or any other country for that matter, into your story.

Not to mention the fact that the animation, drawings and voices are all poorly done and voiced by all the same person in the EXACT SAME TONE. Also, the fact that these flashes were only a few seconds long (which made it very easy to see all 9 in about 2 minutes) and I was able to just skim through your flashes and still have a good idea of what your story is, shows that it is a poorly thought out story and flash.

Everything in this series is very poorly done including the story, drawings, animation, voices, and other elements which escape me at the moment.

Please discontinue this awful series, learn to draw better, get some better equipment to create flashes, and think of a storyline that actually makes sense and is AT LEAST thought out to some degree. If not then I highly recommend you stop producing any flashes and to not pursue a career in animation/drawing or anything of the like.

Jaiba responds:

pretty truthful review, but these chapters are a warm up for a grand spectacular new movie, the last hour chapter 10! I won't bug you to watch it, but you will notice it. action packed, no short cuts

[[2008] REBOOT 10]

Not much originality

The setting and overall concept are very much taken from the original ReBoot series (not to mention using the exact same name: Reboot):

Events happen inside a computer concerning data, files, corruption, Binary Code and other computer paraphernalia.

Not only that but, you also use cameos from outside sources such as: Tetris, Mario, Zelda, Megaman, Metroid, Star Wars, and the Norton Anti-virus program. Some more than others.

Also, icons in this Reboot can be compared to the original ReBoot:
Smite Agent -> Virus
Norton/Render/Police -> Guardian
Grey people -> Square and Sphere citizens

The only thing that's original has to do with your story. There's a lot of mystery behind Violet and the Smite agent vs. The orange girl and their "police" that you've created throughout the series. Violet obviously has done this sort of thing before and the police have dealt with it before as well so there's some unknown history that Render, Amy, and the whole city are being tied up into that I (and other viewers) would expect you to explain later in the series. None of which need the element of events happening and being part of a computer. You could easily come up with a different explanation.

I suggest renaming it something else. Maybe something related to what Violet is trying to do.

For anyone who HAS NOT seen the original ReBoot series on TV this will be a very cool and new experience for you, aside from the cameos, but, the original ReBoot series is a lot better.

For anyone who HAS already seen the original ReBoot series on TV this will seem very rehashed, and copied. It basically looks like they took the "ReBoot" idea, and its name, and remade it to a different story with different physics.

So, this would be a great series... if the ideas you have weren't already done.

Score:
4/10

The story is good but, it doesn't make up for everything else.

JMartin97 responds:

The only reason it's named Reboot is because in the first episode, the computer reboots... any other similarities are coincidental.. don't know what to tell you.. as I actually never watched ReBoot the Tv series.

[-No Frickin Games-]

Sync is off

Yes, the sync is still off. Everything is fine in this though. Good Job.

Lazy-Dan35 responds:

Thanks! I would have fixed this befor I submitted it, but I couldn't tell it was fine on my comp.