Executed Well

Although touching, I can't help but question the accuracy of the bombing. What's the point in bombing empty fields? What's the point of targeting a random couple in the empty field? Wouldn't the planes want to save their bombs for buildings and highly populated areas?

I didn't know what to expect from this, but I was surprised when I heard the voices. It was good voice acting (moreso on the girl's part than the boy's, but only slightly).

The drawings are nice, but the animating quality seemed decent at best, the entirety of the conversation was headshots so you need to add detail to the faces. There wasn't much facial movement during the conversation, their faces seem to always have that one expression up until they started running away from the planes, so it always looked like a static image when they were talking despite the hair and clothes waving in the wind, and the mouth movements didn't seem to match what they were saying most of the time.

Music selection was top notch. Not much to say. Every song went perfectly with each scene.

The idea behind this is good, and you executed it well here, not amazing, but well. My critique is more about polish to your animating technique than to your storytelling, writing, or otherwise.

If you can make smoother animation, and animate faces more, it would sincerely complement this nice story you have here.

Still wondering about those planes' intents and reasons though.

Dante's Mouth

Something really irks me about Dante's mouth. You used that same kind of mouth in your Wilhelm Park flash on the Boy character. It seems to overlap unnaturally on the outsides of the lips and he kind of looks like a fish.

The rest of the parts in your drawings are really nice, and you've improved in your animation skills here since Wilhelm Park.

I can't help but chuckle every time Morrigan says "Carlos DeSUZAAH."
Very nice voice acting on Caxx's part as well.

Stiff movements and Odd Mouths

The movements and facial expressions seemed kind of stiff during the opening conversation scene. Afterwards, though, you animated the Girl character really well.

There's something about the Boy character's mouth that seems off. The outside parts of his lips are overlapping the bottom part and they just stay there while the middle part of his mouth moves when he speaks. Yet, you don't have this problem when drawing and animating the Girl character.

Hope this helps.

Excellent

Suggestions:
- Option to view no visualizations at all because it seems to add to lag quite a bit.
- If possible, load the next song while the current song is playing so that the next song will play instantly.

I'm not exactly sure what signing up does. It gives me my own channel, what does that mean? Does it mean it will play my favourites or will it play stations that I selected (trance, techno, etc.)? If the latter, how can I do this?

Otherwise, this is an excellent flash. I've always wanted a radio station that played good music. :D

Continue? *no choice* --GAME OVER!

I think this could have used a continue system or lives or something because once you get to the later ones (like 8,9,10) it gets harder and it's kinda BS that you have to start ALL OVER again. Even ONE extra chance to do a battle would suffice because it is a fairly simple game, I don't think you'd need more than 2 lives. I say this because the wait time (because it's a quick-draw game) is kinda long, combined with the fact that the entire premise of gameplay is based on pushing a single button. So, some people (like myself) will end up getting impatient because of this.

Otherwise this is a pretty neat mini-game flash.

4/5
7/10

Good, but threw me off

I felt the beat of the triplet (but not really a triplet, not sure what else to call it, I suck at music terms) was -&2&-&4&, but it was really 1-2&3-4&, so I was taken off guard at 2:24 when the bass drum came in RIGHT at 1 and screwed up my momentum with the song.

So, I had to recalibrate myself to the beat and then listen to it and it wasn't as enjoyable as it was when I thought it was the former beat.

If the beat was steady and kept with what I had in mind, I would have already favourited, and downloaded and wouldn't have written this review.

Enjoyed

I thoroughly enjoyed this track. You could probably stand to balance out the sounds a bit to make it better, but I was able to enjoy it as it is.

It reminds me of Megaman 64/Cave Story.

Fireflies - Owl City

I found what this sounds like, but only at certain parts.

Good song.